February 26th, 2009, 6:53 pm

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Not bad....

Chucklenucker (Guest) February 27th, 2009, 3:36 am

You do a pretty decent job with the heads and your coloring, (You don't have to read any of this.) you should try working on anatomy a little though (There are plenty of anatomy tutorials pretty much all over the internet.) maybe try using a ruler for your paneling, it makes thing ALLOT easier with drawing and scanning alltogether. That aside, awesome comic! Can't wait to read more! ^_^

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broken_coda February 27th, 2009, 1:20 pm

thanks for the critique!it's true I need a damn ruler 'cause it pisses me off to see slanted panels and such.But yes I need to work on my anatomy(I kinda suck at it as I'm sure you've noticed)...but I'm glad you enjoying it. :)

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Rulers...

Insert Name Here (Guest) April 18th, 2012, 9:20 pm

Though this is incredibly late I still feel like I should post this for the benefit of others. Sorry if this is ineffective. ^^;

Rulers aren't the only straight edges that can be used. I oftentimes am found without one, so I use a school textbook or folder; something long and straight. If that doesn't seem to be available, you can also sketch out your lines lightly and erase the excess for a nearly perfect line.