March 17th, 2010, 2:23 pm

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chapter 9 pg 51

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So who was waiting for this?

broken_coda March 17th, 2010, 2:32 pm

Well it finally happened and now that it has...how do you feel about it?Personally I'm quite happy with how these last couple of pages came out and despite my poor anatomy I think I did pretty well.I'm definitely excited for chapter 10 'cause that's when we'll meet Adam's dad and we'll see Dorian's mom again as well.Hope you enjoyed the chapter and look for chapter 10 coming soon.

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In England March 17th, 2010, 3:32 pm

I loved Dorian's face when Adam asked him to move in, reminded me of an excited puppy and the sex sense i liked. It makes a change from all the graphical once but it was pleasent.
i love ur scirpt and i wish i knew what Dorian was gonna say though!
Im looking forward to chapter 10 very much.

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AJLin March 17th, 2010, 9:45 pm

XD That was so funny on how after all that, Adam asked him about my shirt! Awesome job!

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Hiii!

Mar (Guest) March 18th, 2010, 1:48 am

I Just wanted to say, if you're not happy with your anatomy, you could always look in Deviant Art for some. I personally would recommend fineart.sk (<<<-- HAS NUDITY!), it's an amazing site for learning and referencing anatomy, there are also various tutorials on YouTube. It seems all you need to do is practice full bodies, proportion, and perspective, which can be really fun with the right mindset. Sorry, if I sound more like an ass than helpful, I don't mean to, if I don't I hope that helped just a little. ><

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Oh!

Mar (Guest) March 18th, 2010, 1:52 am

I still think your story is really well done, especially for a bl story, which most of the time the characters fall for each other for away and have sex by chapter three. I really like your characters as well, they actually have a personality, so really I'm not bashing your story. I really like it.

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DeadLikeYou (Guest) March 21st, 2010, 3:32 am

I love you for posting this chapter up!!!!( That sounded kind of freaky.) TUT

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Gumibearcanibal April 2nd, 2010, 10:04 pm

It took me two hours, But I read this whole thing from the beginning! I LOVE IT!

Btw the scary thing about Dorian, is that
he looks like my gay lover Max (I'm a gay guy btw) O oO